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Today I watched a youtube video called human impact on our Environment. I would like to tell about it. There was a lot of taxis dumped. There was a big tsunami and some of  the people died in the city. The city was full of rubbish. There was  was no-one in that town. There was a tornado in the sky and there was something in the sky that looked  like a hurricane that was going to suck this island in the middle of the sea. Animals were dying because of the rubbish and oil spills. 

I went to the eye centre with my mum. We went to get the results of my eye tests. My eyes were good. We went to a cafe. I had a lollycake. After that we went to a carving shop. I  bought a  gun.
by George


The Owl  


It was a quiet foggy night
The smart old bird
sat calm in the pale moonlight.
 He winked an eye
then flew silently into the
dark, dusky sky.
He spread his feathers
speckled and brown
flew over the sleeping town.
Then he made a sad shout
be sighed little animals
the owl is out!


The words highlighted were changed using a thesaurus by Joshua


Grasshopper Green
Grasshopper Green is a  happy chap;
He lives on the best of  food
Bright little trousers, jacket and cap,
These are his summer wear.
Out in the grass he loves to go,
Playing away in the sun;
It's hopperty, skipperty, high and low-
Summer's the time for fun.
Grasshopper Green has an odd little house;
It's under the bush gay.
Grandmother Spider, as still as a mouse,
Watches him over the way.
Gladly he's calling the children , I know,
Out in the beautiful sun.
It's hopperty, skipperty, high and low-
Summer's the time for fun.


The words highlighted were changed using a thesaurus by Jennifer.



2 comments:

  1. What interesting words you have used Joshua. Keep up the great work.

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  2. Great work George.
    Keep up all of the great work:):)
    Angus

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