Monday, June 17, 2013

CANDY LAND BY KYRA

I gasped as I saw a wonderful place standing before me, fulled with candy!I walked along a path made of humongous chocolate buttons.I saw a bridge and ran up to it and took a little bite. It tasted like Raspberry.  On the other side of  the bridge were a lot of little lolly pops for plants and the grass was made out of candy floss. Just then a big tower loomed in front of me. My eyes followed it right to the top.The castle was made out of chocolate flakes!I went inside and saw four girls and there names were  Maia, Aniela, Emma and Bella. It was getting dark so they took me to the top of the tower and showed me were I would sleep that night. I laid on the bed, It was a water bed!I looked towards the roof that was when I noticed there was no roof! All I could see were candy floss clouds.We went down to the dinning room for tea.We had jaffas, Maltesers and allot more jaffas. That was when I felt sick.I got back to my room and laid on the bed.When it rained I got soaking wet.In the morning Maia and Bella took me to a place called Adventures In The Pits. This sounded fun so I pushed impatiently  threw the door OUCH!! The door hit me in the head but the second time it didn't happen.Once I walked in I saw a slide going down into the pits. I ran up to the top of the slide, took a deep breath  WEE! and slid down the slide.I screamed, something was wrong I was going down.BANG,CRASH,KABOOM.I tumbled down and landed right on my face.I stood up and I had dirt all over my face and a lolly pop!I pulled it and pulled it until the lolly pop finally came off. I looked up and saw a humongous mountain of jaffas!I stepped back and nearly fell into a hole of darkness.I started to climb the mountain.I was nearly at the top when I saw a plaster.It landed on my nose and I nearly fell but a lolly pop saved my life because one hand was holding onto it.I climbed with all my might to the top.I hoped out of the pits,walked out and had a very nice sleep that night.When I woke up I wasn't in Candy Land any more,I was in my real house ''That was just a dream well it was crazy'' I said.


7 comments:

  1. WOW kyra the story is really interesting.I liked how you put two adventures together and made it a really cool story I wish I was in it!! -Sasha

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  2. Kyra real good story. I like the adventure you made up. From Victoria.

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  3. Looks like you worked really hard on it Kyra From Makayla.

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  4. Awesome story Kyra. All the teachers in Nga Kaho enjoyed reading it. From Mrs Lowe

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  5. wow!!! kyra you rock i think you should be in the top group for writting from shakayla

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